two moons
and two suns
implications of movement
abrasive, heaving
of iron lungs
implicit in the breathing
archetypes assail
conclusion
finding is desolate
and broken
desensitized neuromancer
weave cords of copper
a burglar is re-imagined
smoking jacket highs
confounding orbs
can no longer absorb
refraction of everything
now only comes
in pieces
cement is colder
than one would think
flood is more
than earth can drink
when did life become a story
with such furious editors
retake the scenes
reality indebted to
shadowed creditors
no longer aware
which of us
won.
in-between
two moons
and two suns
image courtesy of the great HR Giger and Pinterest
Wow OP. How your mind works.
Such baffling times we live in, and your imagery is creative and amazing.
Speaking of images, that picture!
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Thank you V💚. Yeah my mind is a very strange place, I sure wouldn’t want to get lost there…..uh, ERM, hmmmm
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I meant clever actually 😁
hahaha well I’m glad while you’re (not) lost in there, you’re pushing out such thought provoking stuff, as usual 💚
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Thanks so much my friend 🙏💚
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Great piece of writing
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Thanks very much my friend 🙏
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Great words
🌼🌸🌹
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Thanks so much 🙏
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You are Welcome.
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I’m obsessed with your imagination
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I’m honoured Candice 🙏🖤
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You’re on fire my friend
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Thanks Candice. Means so much coming from you 🙏
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You’re ridiculously talented I love it
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I’m speechless 🙏❤️
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A tale of two suns and two moons, and so many images in your poem!
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Thanks so much my friend 🙏
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It was a seriously great read!
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So three things here that I love:
Your images
HRG
“Neuromancer”
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Hah! thanks man
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About as good as poetry gets my friend.
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Thanks very much Eric, that’s a hell of a complement 🙏🍻
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