Carcrash

This was inspired by my friend Georgia.  XOXO

 

carcrash

How can I feel so much pain

yet feel nothing how many times have I been stung

yet never touched by the sting

If forever is a fever if never is never

what good is it to be this fucking clever

I know what I know and write it down to show

but no, I’m a low fellow

I cannot go

that way

what use is useless, clueless

sometimes mostly stupid and tuneless

ostensibly deranged but you knew that

so how can I feel so fucking dead

was it something that was said?

because all I suffer is in my head

but it doesn’t hurt, it’s just the pain in the rain singing my name for another go at the game and it’s such a shame that I cannot feel anything

Because if i could, you would have just broken me…..

So I’m walking away from another car crash

cuts and bruises just like in the past

hurting but I cannot

feel you

But I hope you are feeling all of this goddamn ruin too

it’s just another accident, another wreck on the road

let’s exchange information, will insurance cover the

damages if I explode?

I don’t know, it’s just a good thing I hurt and cannot feel the distress

because my crash into you might have made me

feel even less

 

 

 

 

 

 

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30 thoughts on “Carcrash

      1. Oh great………coming from you this really means a lot……..to tell you the truth……sometimes i am left speechless to comment anything on your and sudden denouncement poems………..”beautiful” and “loved it” doesn’t cut it……..but i am really inspired by your works! don’t mind my ranting……always a pleasure reading you!! 😀 😀

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  1. This completely sucked me in and demanded to be read out loud. Particularly loved the rhythm and urgency of “but it doesn’t hurt, it’s just the pain in the rain singing my name for another go at the game and it’s such a shame that I cannot feel anything” Sigh. . .

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  2. “but it doesn’t hurt, it’s just the pain in the rain singing my name for another go at the game and it’s such a shame that I cannot feel anything

    Because if i could, you would have just broken me…..” My god, you hit my soul. Outstanding write.

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